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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-20 15:23:09 | from couples to three some,and loving it | So sad medical intervention messed up her libido. Now, this is what I was talking about earlier. See, no foul, when all parties agreed to agree. For a guy, you really know how to spin a good tale about tail & mouths. My past reading experienced has found the ladies do an more excellent job of making life be so fulfilling by detailing the sexual delights of copulation. From me, quite a compliment that U have done such a good job, better than most guys but not quite up to some of the girls I've read here & admired. Thanks again! |
| 2019-08-20 17:51:06 | swinging with Sandy and Dave_(1) | Your scenarios are awesome! Good character development, good action details but words & talking really takes a lot of effort on the reader. "Your" and "You're" are not the same or interchangeable. Where does the person start talking; especially in a conversation between 2 or 3 individuals " " " " These little doodads are called quotation marks to be used to separate quotes or speaking from other parts of the story (look up dialogue meaning conversation). "Hi Bob". "Hi Sandy" How are you today? In need! Do you think you might be able to help me? Which makes more clarity to you? With or with out the little " marks around the words spoken? Please don't misunderstand; I think your ideas, scenarios, and stories are great. Your technical grammar,etc. tend to take away from your unique talent. Just trying to help. Keep writing, maybe get someone else to make suggestions. Some one you can trust. |
| 2019-08-20 22:23:13 | old flame rekindled and getting hotter part3 | As difficult as it seems to be following the details, your themes are fantastic & I'm not going to quit reading your stories. |
| 2019-08-21 02:14:39 | Day two at the nudist camp | "Sorry, too many votes today" Bob, this is a current less than 24 hr post. Of course you knew that but I just noticed. When I read "to be continued", my 1st thought -"There is not another one to read." That's when I checked the time of submission & posting. I really appreciate your creativity, imagination, & the way you present the details of the action. My criticism of your grammar & punctuation was ment to be a help, not a put-down. I would really like to be a help to you if you could accept it. My hope is to start writing about my life experiences similar to yours. I'd be happy to submit them to you for your input & help if you'd like; Just to show you how unprofessional my attempts are. I really want to jump thru enough hoops to PM you ( & others) soon. My technical capabilities on the laptop are not too swift. That puts me at a greater disadvantage. What do you say? i wanat to |
| 2019-08-25 01:53:07 | Back to Salome_(1) | Thank you guys. A beautiful, heartfelt, story of love & acceptance. We all need more of that. All the people come to this site to "get off" or something like that. When you present a "life experience" like this, it is such a refreshing breeze. Sex is a part of life, without it the Earth would not be "replenished" & all life would end. Life is more than sex, & too many people at this site tend to brush that thought aside. There are several authors that share the position that "sex is an important part of life & necessary in most cases, but not an absolute in everyone's life. " Like anything, balance & perspective is important. I love ice cream but too much of it is harmful to my long term health. That sweet dish needs to be balanced with fruit, veggies, meat, etc. Sex is one aspect of life that makes it so sweet. Most readers here probably don't share that view, that's something they have to live with just like I do. |