| 2020-07-10 14:18:28 |
Mother & Virgin Son--Part 1 of 3
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Changing from Jess to Dylan 1st person works well, especially in this setting. Agree with other comment. Looking forward to next episodes. THANKS for sharing your creativity & talent on this site. |
| 2020-07-10 23:55:04 |
Skeletons in my Closet part 21
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Open marriage! Good, just like all the previous chapters. Can't offer any constructive criticism to make anything better than it already is. THANKS for choosing this site to share your story. Check daily for updates. |
| 2020-07-11 13:13:17 |
my new wife and I have an arrangement .
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A very convenient arrangement.. Nothing I could offer would improve anything you' ve already done. That's what I've read, some guys with hot, hot wives have to bring in "backup dick " to keep them happy & " when Mama's happy, everybody's happy!" Eager to see how the 4some develops & will Ken & 9ob be enough to keep Deb satisfied. Personally, I think I'd prefer to share in the same bed ra.ther separate. THANKS again for continuing the saga &sharing your talent on this site. |
| 2020-07-12 00:43:40 |
Megan and Kyle v2 - part 3
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NcFan, glad to see that you enjoy some of the same authors that I do. This revised edition is great. You already had a great scenario with excellent action details. Your "cleaning up' only made a good work better.Thanks for sharing your talent on this site. Check updates daily. |
| 2020-07-13 17:00:45 |
Siblings Desire 3
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Looking forward to part #4. Check updates daily. Want to see how the next few days go; how long does this last; when & if the parents catch them & their reaction??? A lot more left unanswered questions. Great scenario, good action details ; just need more of the story! THANKS for posting on this site |