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Comments from PABLO DIABLO
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-11 13:01:05 | !!! Bitchs Slutty Genes !!! Ch 06 | If I may make a gentle suggestion, get the free copy of grammarly.com It will fix many of the small writing issues (punctuation, verb tense, spelling,etc.) |
| 2019-02-12 14:11:05 | The Daddy File | There are stories that are wonderfully written that just voting 'positive' doesn't seem to do justice. The story moved at a pace that kept the reader interested. Well done Tina! |
| 2019-02-13 05:12:36 | The Chauffeur (#24) The Weekend (part 1) | @busqa69, I'm working on just that. Also, I still have chapter 25 waiting to be published on here. I'm about 3500 words into writing chapter 26. Thank you for being such a fan! |
| 2019-02-14 13:34:07 | The Chauffeur (#22) Tampa and Dallas | Gracias, Senorita! |
| 2019-02-14 13:39:17 | The Chauffeur (#23) The City of Angels | I apologize for three being posted at once. By the way, there is still another chapter waiting to be published (chapter 25). Your idea of changing the Commune's name is a good suggestion. |