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Comments from PABLO DIABLO
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-10-14 03:33:47 | The Rocker Part 5_(3) | DBuck, keep writing. Your segment about Soko had me in tears, spectacular! You are a wonderful writer. It is obvious to me, at least, you have a passion. I'll watch for your next segment. Again, KEEP WRITING, Your fan base is growing! |
| 2018-10-14 16:50:55 | The Overnighter_(1) | Hmm, I don't like stories of rape. This is not consensual, not erotic, not what was expected. Nothing wrong with writing this type of story, but give the reader a head's up if you dabble in this genre. You used 'reluctance' but that is way too mild a deion. Non-consensual sex, rape, blackmail, extreme, hardcore, and violence all should have been added to your story deion. I say this not to be mean, but just offering a different point of view. |
| 2018-10-15 01:15:54 | The Chauffeur(#5).......Jill | I'm working on it now....should be done and published before the end of the week. |
| 2018-10-17 06:24:30 | The Rocker Part 6_(0) | Great Job! Well written, exciting, easy to follow and easy to read. Nice twist at the end! If I might make a gentle suggestion: Maybe DW needs to realize at some point that he doesn't want a girl who wants to 'own' him nor a girl that wants to be 'his'....Instead he realizes that he wants someone who will be his partner and equal...â¦.Just a thought. Nice Job!! |
| 2018-10-19 15:53:41 | Prelude to a Gang Bang | NICE!! You are a wonderful writer. I look forward to reading more. |