| 2019-01-24 06:41:23 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 2
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I'm going to comment about the first one here as well so please bare with me if I bounce around a bit (sorry, had to that). I love how you have people and movies to reference from to give us a clearer picture. The scene when he watches his best friends honestly brought a tear to my eye, I could feel his pain and could easily relate to his feelings of wanting to change. The sex scenes are well written and his escapade with Taylor was especially enticing. I don't even have the right equipment and I got blue balls from parts of it! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for part 3 already <3 |
| 2019-01-25 15:32:12 |
Becoming Daddy's Girl part 1
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I apologise for the awkward spacing, when I copied it over from my PDF file it ended up like this. |
| 2019-01-30 17:46:38 |
Becoming Daddy's Girl part 1
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Vagina's Master - Thank you. I had it spaced out differently when I transferred the story over and never corrected it, as I should have. However, I still had both conversing in the same paragraph so I appreciate the tip and will be sure to correct that in part 2. |
| 2019-02-20 19:15:52 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 3_(1)
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Amazing, as usual, very well written. I've said it once and I'll say it 100 more times, I love you you include movie references and even celebrity deions for your characters so we can get a full visual. Thank you for the shout out definitely brought a smile to my face :) |
| 2019-02-24 23:48:50 |
What Would Steven Do? Part 4
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Amazing story!!! Can't wait for part 5!!! |