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Comments from Lunalupo
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-09-29 23:25:00 | Getting Addison Graduated | Loved the story, you have the talent to become a great writer. But, you need to read your own stories to check for grammar and spelling. For example, "principle" refers to money while "principal" is a person. Microsoft grammar and spell checkers are not always correct. Keep writing and posting. |
| 2009-10-04 04:10:33 | Unbroken | This is an awesomely great story, well written - brought the reader right into the action, loved it. And LARRY is definitely a creep. Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-07 14:00:59 | Young Becky | Bump to read your stories later - so far they are great. Keep em cummmming please. |
| 2009-10-07 20:39:33 | Becky's Gangbang Continues | I would love to read the first part of the story. Could you please post a link to it? thanks, Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-07 20:40:12 | Becky's Gangbang Continues | BTW - I gave you a positive rating on this ..... |