| 2009-09-22 21:01:15 |
Jule Loved by Everyone
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Sorry this is too long for you. It is actually an e-novel with a total of 7 parts. Parts one and two already posted. Will post part three soon. |
| 2009-09-22 21:06:46 |
Julie Loved by Everyone, Parft II
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Part 3 will be posted soon. |
| 2009-10-04 00:11:19 |
Roxy Baby
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I loved the story and gave it a positive. However, when you said "Although I’ll do most things I didn’t fancy sticking my cock in the same place that the dog had just been" I wondered why. That would have been awesome. The arse was good also. Now need a story about her biker life - IN DETAIL PLEASE. Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-03 23:22:33 |
Dog day afternoon_(1)
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Great story line. I gave you a positive. I too would like to see more description of the female's enjoyment of the sex. See "Uncle's Little Blessing" by The SlutMan at storiesonline.net for a great example of descriptive sex. |
| 2009-09-26 20:57:26 |
Jule Loved by Everyone
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Parts 2 and 3 have been posted. Working on part 4. There is a lot of vivid sex in each part as well as the story to tell. |