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Comments from At00micAsh
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-05 21:34:35 | The Way it is Now Ch 6 | Thank you all for the votes both positive and Negative I'm a little sad I don't have more comments telling me why you like. I am equally interested in the why you don't. I do take constructive criticism well meaning "try this" and "change that" keyboard heros who only put you people down keep on steppin Thank you Ash xxoo |
| 2019-05-07 01:17:46 | Summer Teen Fever | I'm Not trying to be mean. I DO like how you write I'm just making a couple observations. "Call it a COCK" You do the same line in every story. it's become a turn off. Me personally? have never had a guy tell me to call it anything. and I was a bit of a slut in highschool :( Also, the curious 8th grade virgin jumping into bed on the first date made your last three stories pretty much cookie cutter. I've stopped reading them. Please Keep writing. you are good at it. Just try to move the story lines around |
| 2019-05-14 11:17:43 | The Wayit is now Ch9 | A thousand reads in 24 hours? Aww. Thanks guys!! That's amazing. And thank you for the votes. More votes more comments please!!! Can someone tell me why check 7 seems to be the bastard step child lol |
| 2019-05-17 01:26:54 | Jailbait | Sadly, I don't remember my first time. Or my tenth or many after I was drunk or high or both. But I remember my first time with the man in my life. I was not quite her age, he a little younger than George. it was Earthshattering!! thank you for sharing |
| 2019-05-17 23:01:03 | Jessie_(1) | Awww. Thank you for reading my story. Technically, Sarah and Philip's adventure is done. We may/not have further adventures now that Rachel has joined them. I'm waiting to see if people ask for more or not. I didn't get many comments. Plenty of votes. Also thank you. |