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Comments from Dave451uk
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-13 15:50:57 | Flat But Sexy | Good story and I am also a fan of small-breasted girls. Big tits are a real put-off for me. I have noticed that girls with small breasts are often good at showing them off and it was interesting to read how Vic was coached by Shelly. I often wondered! One critism, if I may. It is too long and goes from one experience to the next, to the next. You should consider breaking it up into parts or having a strong story line under the action and/or introducing some interesting sub-plots.. |
| 2019-09-30 20:13:33 | Anna's Last Year at School_(2) | <<kaiwailovers>> Thank you so much for your positive comment. I am new to writing fiction so all feedback, good or bad, is welcome as long as it is constructive. You can read what happens to Anna next in my other two stories ('Anna's New Career' and 'Anastasia Starts Work'). |
| 2020-02-21 10:25:26 | Anna’s New Career_(1) | Impax - thanks for your comment - you will have to read on to see what becomes of her. Will she become a doctor or will she continue working in the sex industry? Even I don't know yet so I'm open to suggestions! |
| 2020-09-15 20:35:56 | Dakota’s Surprise: Part 2 – The Convention | Thanks, interesting story! You give good de***********ions of the costumes but more detail about the people themselves would be helpful as I did not really get a good picture in my mind about them. The minimal sexual content is not a problem. A strong story line, which you have, is important and can easily be weakened by adding gratuitous sexual content. Good luck with your writing! |
| 2020-12-04 10:31:37 | Anastasia Starts Work | Thamks Dudley. I am thinking about the next plot lines and 'Julie' is an interesting thought. I like plots where things are not always as they seem, so maybe I should be writing crime fiction! |