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Comments from Dave451uk
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-04-04 20:08:20 | Covid19 and money troubles - Chapter 1 | Thanks for the story. This is a very topical theme and I am sure many women, and men, will turn to the sex trade to make ends meet. If I may be allowed a negative comment, I would like to see more de***********ion of your characters and the activities they get up to so we can visualise them better and understand their character. Although the people we write about are fictional (usually!) It does help if we can relate to their character. |
| 2021-06-04 20:53:01 | Confessions of a High School Cheerleader - Part 1 | Good story but a bit too long. Think about dividing into two or three chapters to keep us reading. |