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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-06-04 19:54:37 | Naked Day - part 19 Homeward Bound | 17 and 18 were posted already. Don't skip those. |
| 2020-06-09 13:57:57 | Naked Day - part 29 - Eight Years Later | I wish I knew what the negatives didn't like. Anyway, this series is nearing its end. Maybe it was too long. I'll keep future writings to many fewer chapters. Thanks to those who enjoyed my first attempt at story writing. |
| 2020-06-09 13:59:37 | Naked Day - part 30 - Reunion | This is the final chapter in the Naked Day story. I'll be posting different stories next. I do have several Naked Day Epilogues that I may post as I go along. Thanks everyone. |
| 2020-06-11 21:38:00 | Sisters at the Shore | Thanks for the comment. I'd appreciate it if you could give a couple of examples. I reread this one multiple times after earlier criticism. Of course I know who's talking because I wrote it so I don't see that maybe. As far as punctuation and grammar, I'd be surprised to find much wrong. |
| 2020-06-13 16:45:23 | Working Overtime 1 | Since it was my first time writing I literally had no idea when to end it. I actually have several more Naked Day related Epilogue stories that I’ve decided to hold on to rather than publish here. It became obvious that far fewer people were reading the later stories, even though a few of them were among my favorites. Oh well, live and learn. Thanks for reading and giving a new story a chance. |