| 2020-10-06 16:34:30 |
Dakota’s Surprise: Part 4 – New Friends
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Well written, as usual. I'll continue following the ups and downs of Dakota's life. |
| 2020-10-06 16:35:00 |
Dakota’s Surprise: Part 4 – New Friends
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Note: I voted on this before I was logged in |
| 2020-10-08 20:26:27 |
Redemption.
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I wonder what it is that some people don't like? They vote anonymously, so I can't even ask. |
| 2020-10-10 23:53:48 |
Redemption.
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It doesn't matter anyway. It seems I've been blocked from posting on the forum so I'll be out of here soon. No idea what happened and no one answers requests for info. |
| 2020-10-13 14:48:56 |
Sins from my Stepmother, Book 1 (Ch 1-3)
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HI, I hadn't realized that it was your first posted story when I voted. I probably wouldn't have voted at all. As to why a negative. On it's own it's well written, but it doesn't really go anywhere. It's incomplete in and of itself. It appears that you intend to add more to it and there's potential certainly. But at that moment, I read what was posted and thought, that's it? So I voted and moved on. No intent to offend you or be spiteful. |