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Comments from boober70
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2022-10-17 07:26:38 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 07 - Time for a Gang Bang | There is no way this story is 70%. Shame on you for voting negative. A fairer system would be to have multiple voting buttons rather than positive or negative. Thanks for the GB and keep up the great work. Sarah is very naughty |
| 2022-10-17 07:37:35 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 08 - The Naked Run | And slowly Jenny gets reeled in to the scene. Loved how she is slowly being brought in whilst Sarah continues to be used as a slave but also be loved at the same time. More great writing Tony |
| 2022-10-17 08:25:49 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 09 - Jenny Submits | Another great piece of writing. You managed to convey everything, Jenny being ensnared in the web set down by both of them, Sarah also gets again to show her other side by allowing Mr Michaels to take her friend and of course the ever present master. Hopefully lots more to come of this. |
| 2022-10-17 10:32:22 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 10 - Threesome | I am onboard with what throatHER says as well. Some of the best stories I have read here and other sites definitely develop the characters to the point I enjoy the story so much you forget it is a sex story. Don't get me wrong there is nothing wrong here, it is a great story so far but could easily be fleshed out a little without losing the plot and would likely add to it. When lots of chapters like we have I have no issue having chapters with little sex and lots of story. Again all my opinion and everyone wants something different mate. Overall all though love it love it love it |
| 2022-10-17 12:50:52 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 11 - The Interview | Is Mr Michaels a sadistic bastard that gets off on dominating young girls or is he a kind gentleman that helps young girls find their way in life? Whichever way you see it, still a damn good read. |