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Comments from darkride
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-05-21 14:10:37 | I was conned by a sexy woman. | Lovely little story.... just felt it needed a little more toward the end when he was nailed by the hubby. |
| 2021-05-23 06:44:01 | Katie is not a Virgin Anymore | Enjoyable enough read, however the second half got a bit overly complicated. Might have been better to keep this chapter focused on Uncle Dave and Katie's descent into being his slut, and then foreshadowed the introduction of Cindy/other girls at the end, leading into Chapter 2...? |
| 2021-05-28 04:21:45 | Surprise Bedfellows - Part 2 (updated) | Thank-you for the mostly positive votes. I appreciate this chapter has 2 things going against it - being a "diary" format, and that LONG paragraph in the middle... Sometimes the characters you create just wont take a breath, dammit! :) |
| 2021-06-24 06:05:55 | The Swap - Chapter One | Sorry to hear that @The_Naked_Guy I am guessing the issue was the "dog/wolf" aspect of the story? It was tagged as having bestial content... |
| 2021-06-27 06:51:31 | The Swap - Chapter One | Fair enough - though again, it was tagged with Mind Control and D/s, which I'd have thought covered those aspects. Sorry it wasn't your cup of tea. |