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Comments from leer75372
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2025-04-30 10:52:05 | Full Recovery Ch. 1 | At last, someone who can write. |
| 2025-04-30 11:09:19 | Full Recovery Ch 3 | As I said under part 1, it’s to good read something from some who can write. |
| 2026-03-28 10:06:07 | Introduction to Family Fun | It’s “naturist”, not “naturalist”. David Attenborough is a naturalist. |
| 2026-03-28 10:12:33 | Introduction to Family Fun | Your story isn’t too bad but you need a proofreader/editor. It also needs to be fleshed out a bit as it’s a bit too short. I’ll go and read about your grandparents now. |
| 2026-03-28 10:22:46 | More Family Fun | Like your earlier story, you need a proofreader/editor. The story also needs fleshing out. You lost a few days. Easter holiday would be, I assume, four days. Your grandparents arrived on Friday and were going to leave on Monday. But after Friday’s fun, one lot of grandparents left the next day which would be Saturday. I assume you are in the UK (spelling and Easter being in summer). |