| 2025-10-13 18:51:23 |
Felicia…
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Such a beautiful, sad story! This one isn't just a sex-story, it's more like real literature! Never think that your ability with English is an obstacle to your writing, because it really, really isn't! My eyes slid right over any "mistakes", because it was your mind and heart written on the page. Truly beautifully written! |
| 2025-10-14 17:48:17 |
BadBoys
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Excellent story! Can't say I "enjoyed" this one, exactly... ACTUAL rape isn't one of my fantasies, only play-rape. But it was extremely effective at conveying the emotion of the scene! I felt so angry at those boys, so protective of the girl! |
| 2025-10-15 17:56:09 |
How I become daddy's lover…
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I liked this one a lot! The way you bounced back and forth in time at the beginning, giving more context... that isn't easy to do well, and you did. And the call-back you made, having her battling dragons on her computer, and then mentioning a dragon again when they were having sex... such a cute little detail, really giving her personality! |
| 2025-10-16 03:13:48 |
Sexy..?
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I may be a little biased... but I've already told you how much I enjoyed this story. (And in it's original form, not just after my small touches!) Funnyway is selling herself short here—she wrote the entire thing from start to finish, without any help from me. I just... polished it, a little bit, after she was done. But the raw material was all hers, and she deserves all the credit! :) |
| 2025-10-16 22:21:12 |
Uncle Jack...
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A lovely, complicated story. Poor Alice... so much emotion, all at once, even she doesn't know how she feels. |