| 2025-11-27 02:57:26 |
My Daughter Broke Up With Her Boyfriend
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Distant Lover... what are you even talking about? Did you actually READ this story, before commenting? Ivy wasn't a virgin. And it already IS written from the viewpoint of the father. Also, not all girls bleed on their first time, that's a myth. It depends on the girls' individual anatomy. Girls CAN bleed (and not only on their first time, by the way), but not all do. It just depends. |
| 2025-11-27 03:06:21 |
Taken By My Best Friend's Dad, And She Wants To Watch!
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Distant Lover, saying a teenage girl would have "described the events differently" is meaningless. Differently HOW? If you're not going to bother being specific with your criticism, you may as well not comment at all. |
| 2026-02-18 16:24:02 |
Kitten Kisses It Better
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Really enjoyed it! My only (minor) criticism is that throats don't have taste buds. If he came in her mouth, she should taste it and swallow. If he came in her throat, it should just shoot straight down. That momentarily took me out of the story. But I still really liked it, well done. |
| 2026-02-22 15:25:13 |
One night in Istanbul
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I enjoyed it a lot. Very hot, a lovely mixture of romance, emotion, and sex. |
| 2026-07-01 12:25:31 |
The New Girl Invited Me For A Sleepover
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Baldor; you're not wrong, but as of this comment, I've published seventy-seven different stories on this site. I don't think you realize just how difficult it is, trying to come up with completely unique descr*ptions for each of them. Even unique titles is difficult sometimes! Hopefully you enjoy the stories themselves, even if the one-liners seem a little repetitive. |