| 2008-08-13 18:18:22 |
SFM Alternate Ending: Alice
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really? That bad?... you all make me dissapointed in myself |
| 2008-08-13 21:06:06 |
SFM Alternate Ending: Alice
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yes I'm one of those loser writers who comments his own stuff. Usually just to post news for readers. Anyway the story was doing... bloody awful, but it seems to be picking up slightly, if it keeps going and makes it to at least 80% I'll post another |
| 2008-08-17 09:13:43 |
Seven Fair Maidens Part Two
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lol I didn't believe you about the paragraph thing but I just read it and I did! I can't believe I did that, whoops, lool |
| 2008-08-21 23:15:18 |
Good Morning Dad
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uhm... there was like no story line. I can understand spelling and grammar errors because just about every one of my stories has them, but yeah need to work on your writing buddy |
| 2008-08-21 23:29:46 |
A Tale of 2 Nerds
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I rather liked it actually. I got confused by a couple of things but no big deal. But you should of read my first story, it was not perfect I'll tell you that |