| 2008-08-23 14:50:34 |
DAUGHTERS HORNY URGES
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by god that was good! it was a long read but totally worth it |
| 2008-08-25 22:56:47 |
Vampire Jesse
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not bad, not bad at all, though it does have some of the spelling/grammar errors my first story had, but don't worry about it, just keep writing bro |
| 2008-08-26 18:19:22 |
A Tale of 2 Nerds - Chapter 2
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good job my man, it made me hard. Can't wait till 3 |
| 2008-08-30 17:39:40 |
A Kind Stranger
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cute, I dig it |
| 2008-08-30 16:36:13 |
nawty lil kelly
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now this is a good story, you did have a couple errors, but so do most of my stories. And maybe next time space your paragraphs a little more, it kind of sucks to read things on this website, the blue background and all. But keep 'em coming and I'll be sure to keep reading. |