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Comments from LadyofTheRavens
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-09-28 09:08:26 | One Night of... | Interesting how one can vote something negative, yet not be willing to voice why they didn't like it... Feedback is always welcomed.. |
| 2008-09-28 11:24:25 | Bit short in the telling.. but definitely a good read.. any chance there's a follow up of the remaining days they had of just the two girls and him alone? | |
| 2008-09-28 13:34:26 | Jordan and I | Good story but i think it could do with a little more in the way of details: taste, touch, scent, the emotional feel, etc. As a fan of this genre of story I say it was very well written as a beginning piece. |
| 2008-10-02 22:54:30 | Daddy's Tease - Part Two | Beautifully written and very detailed. Keep writing!! |
| 2008-09-29 18:08:06 | One Night of... | 2008-09-29 14:47:27 To Reader You might want to know a person before you make assumptions. I've you look at the writers bio it's not the first time I've written. I happen to be a published poet for over 15 years. As for the tag "First time" It is the first time, since the point of the poem is a woman's fantasy of a man she barely knows. Thus the notes at the end combined with the actual poem itself. Dan-o, no follow through yet, but the semesters just begun. |