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Comments from YoungAuthor
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-12-13 02:17:18 | A whole new world_(1) | a little long-winded. Try to let the plot progress smoother and show events to a reader, don't just list them. good for a first time. |
| 2009-01-04 23:19:03 | Dad's best Friend | it's kinda difficult to read. I kept getting lost, and skipping lines. |
| 2009-01-04 23:25:08 | Oh the Suspence | you spelled suspense wrong. in the title. |
| 2009-01-22 14:46:20 | Having Fun | kind of... unimpressive. keep trying. |
| 2009-02-10 18:03:21 | latest obsession #2 | the reader below me.... is talking about having sex with robots... Why is this? |