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Comments from Merc098
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-06-07 02:35:30 | Medieval Torture | What the fuck......? Okay obviously there are several problems with this story. First it is one paragraph. Second you are missing several words in each sentence. Third you don't capital the letter I at all. Fourth you can't spell worth shit. If you ever consider writing another story ever again, use a DICTIONARY, read your story once you finish writing it, edit it and then get a friend or family member to proof read it! In conclusion your stories are horrible and insult the world of literature! Yes I'm being mean but I have to be to get my point across. And as for Ravnet dhanoa you are fucking insane to think this shit it INTERESTING, and you're full of shit with that job offer! Now while my stories have some errors I at least admit that they do and try to correct them. Unfortunately I have little time to post the corrected versions. |
| 2013-12-19 02:16:53 | Mutation | not bad i shall await part two, there were however some errors but this has potential |
| 2014-06-13 14:04:02 | Magi Of The Dark Arts | Working on it people been rather busy with work. just be patient I'll post the second chapter when its good and ready. |
| 2012-09-06 15:02:02 | R.P.G.R Episode 2 | I would like to point out that R.P.G.R stands for Roleplay game R rated. This is a sexual roleplay. |
| 2012-09-07 23:44:18 | R.P.G.R Episode 2 | I think my friend just wanted to add some odd elements to her character, while her friend went along with it. I'm not sure what the two where trying to do but just keep an open mind that they meant this to be a sexual rp with some story scenes. |