| 2013-09-14 09:30:01 |
My Son In Law
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I like the way the two characters interact, especially the way she wants to out-do her daughter, wants to be better than her daughter. You write well. I enjoyed the story. |
| 2014-04-15 00:47:45 |
Looking after Liz
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I liked the story. I like to read about how the girl seduces the older guy. She is inexperienced so struggles at it. But the guys have no real willpower to resist, no matter how good or bad the girl is at it. I read one of the comments about how he wouldn't wait until morning. I agree. If you write a part 2, you might circumvent this by having the girl initiate the next round of sex after they take a shower, not waiting for morning. |
| 2014-01-25 14:51:40 |
Daddy Aquires Lexi Chapter 1
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Excellent story, very well done. I look forward to reading the rest of the series. |
| 2014-03-07 16:05:22 |
Beautiful Niece Kaylee
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Very well done. Can't wait for part 2. |
| 2014-03-09 14:57:43 |
Seduction of a Babysitter Part VII
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Nice. But I'm at a loss. Where do you go from here?...unless Stacy has a sister or Janis has a best friend. |