| 2010-08-01 07:20:25 |
NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN
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You need a good proofreader - did you rush it for the deadline? |
| 2010-08-01 10:14:15 |
ONENAUGHTYGIRL.
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Interesting but it didn't engage me, I found the characters hard to beleive in..... |
| 2010-08-01 10:17:41 |
If Only.
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Very dark and unpleasant, the characters were deeply unlikeable but horribly believeable. A difficult topic and well written. |
| 2010-08-12 05:07:52 |
The Beach_(2)
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Anonymous, I appreciate constructive critiscism. A pity I can't understand what the heck you mean..... |
| 2010-10-02 18:06:03 |
A Time To Come.
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Very different and unusual - I kind of knew the ending was coming, I didn't want to read that part :( |