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Comments from curiousgirl
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-21 03:33:10 | I Give My Niece A Ride_(0) | I liked the story a lot. It isn't a stereotypical "my wife hates sex" story. Very realistic. The only thing I didn't like is the use of the word "kitty" instead of pussy or the even stronger word cunt. But that is my personal preference. Great story! |
| 2011-05-24 21:29:08 | Unexpected_(1) | The actual writing in this story could use some work. You veer between present tense and past tense. It was better when you settled on past tense (the natural tense for telling a story). I like the story itself. The bdsm stuff, including the humiliation, is very hot. I liked some of the things he did to her and the language you used to describe it. A Master indeed. |
| 2011-06-26 21:30:59 | Just one girl..... | Great job, Janey. As someone above me said, every now and then, a quickie is just the thing. The only thing that tripped me up was that when you said "lounge," I was thinking of a coffee shop type lounge. So when she pulled up her shirt, I thought "Wow, she's brave" -- but that was also kind of exciting :-) I enjoyed reading it. |
| 2011-07-23 17:12:20 | The Frat | You've always had strong characters in your stories and this is just another example. Extreme. I hope you keep writing. |
| 2011-07-30 00:26:04 | My new Possession! | Amber is a lucky girl! You can just tell that she longs to be dominated. |