| 2011-09-28 22:21:25 |
Till Death
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Excellent. Well-written, great characterization. Nice little twist. |
| 2011-10-01 15:48:52 |
The Tribunal 2.
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Brilliant. Heart-breaking, erotic, well put together. As with other stories of yours I've read, you create strong characters with very few words. It's a joy to read your stories. |
| 2011-10-16 00:53:59 |
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Hey PP. I had encountered some of your posts on the forum in the stories threads, so I thought I would check out your stories. I'm not much into lesbian stories, although I do like bdsm, so I thought I would start with this one. I quite enjoyed it. I really liked reading about Arthur's exhibitionism. Very erotic! |
| 2011-12-05 00:39:44 |
Ramadan
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Excellent! The characterization and descriptions were perfect. You did a wonderful job of mimicking the dialogue and tone -- and certain playfulness -- of the Arabian Nights. |
| 2011-12-06 23:17:20 |
A HEAVEN FOR NINA
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Really good, HD. It did have a few mistakes that I know you would've picked up on in a proofread, but none of them detracted from a very warm story. The characterization was finely drawn. |