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Comments from stargatefan
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-02-10 00:39:50 | Hard Day's Night | This was a pretty hot fic. Incest is awesome and so is anal. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2011-02-10 10:09:42 | WHY I BANGED MY BOY IN THE BATHROOM | This was a hot story. You have a superb vocabulary and grammar skills. Thank you for sharing. |
| 2011-04-02 12:00:44 | I very much enjoyed this story. The smut was hot. I loved your creative use of your character's powers. Thanks for sharing. | |
| 2011-04-13 09:46:21 | Jessica Loves Me? 3 | This was a pretty good story. Just a bit of advice: Mix up the words you use to describe the characters and their body parts. For example, don't just use cock. Use shaft, dick, prick, tool, man meat, and the like. Instead of just pussy use snatch, cunt, sheath, sex, sexpot, honey pot, womanhood, mound, and cunny. It makes the story easier to read and flow better. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2011-04-13 11:47:37 | The Touch_(1) | This was a great story so far. I always enjoy a good mind control fic. While agree with the previous reviewer that this fic has potential I strongly disagree with his encouragement to find 10 years told fuck. That's right you sick fuck reviewer...go get yourself arrested for pedophilia. Now if you could just fix the formatting errors this fic will be an awesome read. |