| 2010-09-21 04:23:47 |
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You have potential but I would like to see you develop the characters and turn this into a story and not just an event from a story. |
| 2010-10-02 13:16:07 |
Daddy's Little Minx: Maria
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I know this is just a story but do girls that age really fantasize about having sex with their fathers? |
| 2010-10-25 18:12:27 |
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Thanks for reading part 1. There are a total of 6 parts, all building on each other and each hotter than the previous. Part 1 is just the set-up for the other chapters. The last 2 chapters are called "Uncle Time Returns." They were added because so many readers asked me to continue the story. Most of my readers say they enjoyed the series. Hope you enjoy it too. |
| 2010-10-25 18:13:15 |
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Thanks for reading part 1. There are a total of 6 parts, all building on each other and each hotter than the previous. Part 1 is just the set-up for the other chapters. The last 2 chapters are called "Uncle Time Returns." They were added because so many readers asked me to continue the story. Most of my readers say they enjoyed the series. Hope you enjoy it too. |
| 2011-04-30 02:13:37 |
Wet Dreams; Bitchy Behavior; Lust & Love
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It must be difficult to put on your lipstick with your tongue shoved so deep into your cheek? This story goes to show that a good writer, when given lemons can still come up with a good tart. Thumbs up. |