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Comments from demck23
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-03-01 09:35:37 | Master Harry Part 1 | so lets have the next part soon. enjoyed it very much keep it going. Dave |
| 2012-06-26 12:11:10 | Harry potter chapter one | hell I enjoyed it very much just hope you finish it most just don't compleat them after starting them. just wish you had put Harry with Hermy not Ginny. Allway though she should have been with N longbottem and Ron with Luna. So lets have the next part and keep it going. your right to tell them to do or don't make negative remarks |
| 2012-07-02 18:30:32 | Harry Potter: As One War Ends Another Begins Part 7 | enjoyed it but wished it would have been Harry doing it with her |
| 2012-07-03 09:49:00 | Harry potter unfinished re-write | So lets have Harry getting together with Luna and they become a couple and making a life without Ron or Ginny in it but keep hermy in it |
| 2012-07-10 15:29:45 | Harry Potter Chapter One Re-Write | I gave this a negitive because you still put the Ashole RON with Hermione and made Harry look like an ashole. now lets try again and it's a harry potter story not a Ron story he was a total ashole in the whole books. All my daughters friends hated him and wanted Harry and Hermione together with maybe Luna with them. They all though Ginny should be with Nevile. so lets have the next part but do it right and cut the Ron out totaly |