| 2010-08-12 12:43:34 |
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Lookin Good!! I'll check out the other posted chapters, but I'm sure they'll be just as good. Thanks for the great read!!! |
| 2010-08-12 12:52:27 |
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A very good read - and I'm glad to see that you left it open-ended for adding more. And I certainly hope you do!!! |
| 2010-11-28 13:29:02 |
Hailey's First Time
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A Decent enough story, but way, WAY too short. An awful lot of things happening here but so little detail, it leaves a LOT to be desired. I would love to read more about what went on, how it started, what the boys were doing, why she deleted everything, etc. etc. |
| 2010-11-28 13:30:10 |
Hailey's First Time
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A Decent enough story, but way, WAY too short. An awful lot of things happening here but so little detail, it leaves a LOT to be desired. I would love to read more about what went on, how it started, what the boys were doing, why she deleted everything, etc. etc. |
| 2010-11-28 13:31:33 |
Hailey's First Time
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A Decent enough story, but way, WAY too short. An awful lot of things happening here but so little detail, it leaves a LOT to be desired. I would love to read more about what went on, how it started, what the boys were doing, why she deleted everything, etc. etc. |