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Comments from Don'sdick
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-09-22 03:53:19 | Dessert for Two | Very good! I prefer complete stories over 'chapters', but I gotta go read your others. |
| 2020-09-23 04:09:46 | New Neighbors-pt.1 | You may need to change the introduction, or Donna's age. Assuming she was only 18 when Dawn was born, that would make the girl only 12. I could relate a similar experience with a 15yr old when I was her softball coach, but I'll save that one for one of my stories. Otherwise, good work. BTW, I prefer full stories to 'chapters', but carry on. |
| 2020-10-03 04:49:45 | Naughty Betty Sold My House- pt-1 | GREAT! I would love to have that place in the woods, and I have a former teenager I would like to share it with. |
| 2020-10-13 20:52:05 | Tricking my husband into fucking a bitch dog | When I was a kid, I fucked a dog, half a dozen goats, a three day old foal, my sister and two cousins. Hell, I'm 77 now and would do it all again. Good story, a little bit of proofreading would help. Keep it up (this one kept mine up) |
| 2020-10-23 20:05:44 | Cheating on my Husband | Good story, I voted positive. Proofreading and punctuation would make for easier reading, I'll be traveling to the UK someday.. sure would like a hookup. |