| 2015-06-22 13:52:22 |
The Taking of Elizabeth: Chapter 1
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Excellent start to what looks to be a great story. I look forward to the next part. I hope you post it soon. |
| 2015-07-28 01:56:53 |
Discarding A Pitiful Bitch_(1)
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Since you so freely criticized another author, I felt free to do the same for you. Before posting again, I strongly suggest you proof read you work several times then use spell check. This could have been a good story if not for all the grammatical errors then force me to stop and try to understand what you were trying to say. Better luck next time. |
| 2015-10-10 04:30:21 |
ABDUCTION OF KATIE
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I thought it was fun and interesting, especially if you wrote in in a couple of hours. I look forward to the next installment with Stephanie the bitch. I'll bet you write one hell of a follow up. |
| 2015-11-27 19:35:02 |
The Vampire Kiss Chapter Two: Chained
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Great story as usual from you. I look forward to the next installment. |
| 2015-12-22 19:54:10 |
Rick Returns: Son's Revenge 2
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I loved this story Batman 79. I hope you write a third part. What happened in Baghdad and maybe a little about some of the jobs he took. Ron has to be done away with as well. Hope to see more, |