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Comments from biglw17
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2011-03-14 08:16:03 | man i gotta say this series is ridiculously legendary. i love the length of each chapter, i love the people in each chapter, i love how depictive it is on such a great scale, like chapter 5 was paul telling dawn the story, the way you wrote was so amazingly right on how a person would tell it, is crazy... i would be very very sad to not see anymore chapters for this story |
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2011-04-10 01:33:50 | The Siblings | Great story, glad you posted it. I hope you post the other parts very soon. |
2011-04-23 02:32:02 | Talia: Part One | After i read this story i said out loud "That was awesome" in a cool, mello way. Great story bro, i really don't have any complaints here, besides maybe you could show some more description on how they look so we could see them more clearly in our mind, tho i did get the jist of how they look so its not that big of a deal. Hope to see more parts soon. |
2011-04-30 02:45:22 | Brave New World 1 | this was a pretty good story, wish there was more in this chapter, but i can see that this story could be really good i hope you post more soon. |
2011-05-05 04:25:11 | Full Circle - Chapter Seven | Beautifully done my friend, so happy to see another chapter up. Not much to say, except i hope to see the next one soon. B!G. |