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Comments from annasdaddy
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-09-24 20:27:36 | Almadelia's night out | Not my cup of tea but fairly well written. Funny the last "anonymous reader" criticized people for leaving contact info then refused to do so themselves. I think I will leave contact info on my next story. |
| 2010-09-24 20:34:48 | Amy and her daddy. Part 1 | I thought it was pretty good. Yes, it needs some work. Whoever said to "[not] ignore the critics" gave good advice. Keep trying. I just posted my first under the handle "annasdaddy." My title is lame but I hope you like the story. |
| 2010-09-25 18:12:41 | First meeting with StoneyPoint | I wonder why no one has commented on your story. I very much appreciate your comments on mine. I am in the process of revising it as well as writing others. I feel as though I know a decent amount about human as well as female anatomy. I mean, sometimes i know I know more than some women! I have heard of children masturbating from (at least) infancy and I certainly don't think there's anything wrong with that. I have also had girlfriends tell me that they experienced orgasms, usually through masturbation, at very young ages. Even if, in a story, a character "punished" someone for something, that doesn't necessarily reflect upon my personal views which, I should point out, explicitly EXCLUDE sexual relations with children. You have a good clear style, I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks, Daniel |
| 2010-09-25 18:18:59 | The Dark | Now that's a damn good story. The long paragraph made my eyes blur a little, but over all you really had great pacing. It's wonderful the way you seem to resist sharing your fantasies but ultimately are compelled to share more and more. I love the internal struggle implicit in all of your work. Daniel |
| 2010-09-30 21:01:35 | Bill's Life Part 3 – Having Daughters | I tried to read it but there was a lot of confusing stuff right off the bat and those huge blocks of text are always like hitting a brick wall. You obviously have plenty of skills. At a certain point, though, you gotta slow down, indent a little, think about pacing. Thanks for the contribution though. A re-write would probably go a long way. |