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Comments from annasdaddy
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-06-08 02:01:06 | Daddy's reawakening - Chap 1 & 2_(0) | Thought your pacing was excellent. Character development was strong. Would've liked to have known the daughters age right off. |
| 2015-06-08 17:36:51 | Daddy's reawakening - Chap 7 | This was your best one yet. Pacing is obviously a matter of taste. There are a few typos in each but you clearly have good grammar and structure (and presumably don't hire an editor). Great stuff. Keep it up. |