| 2017-12-18 19:03:04 |
Lisas Transformation 11-14
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A spell check would be helpful. |
| 2018-01-31 23:25:34 |
Hashtagged
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Loved the ending. |
| 2018-02-01 14:13:38 |
Brother and Sister Part 3
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Good story but you need to keep the story tense consistent. It is either told in the past or the present but not both. |
| 2018-02-02 14:42:03 |
Alice's Descent into Debauchary_(1)
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Good story. You need to proof read your story to ensure correct spelling, punctuation, and maintaining the proper tense (you have present and past mixing up together). |
| 2018-02-02 14:42:20 |
Alice's Descent into Debauchary_(1)
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Good story. You need to proof read your story to ensure correct spelling, punctuation, and maintaining the proper tense (you have present and past mixing up together). |