| 2018-08-15 05:39:52 |
Step Daughters' Desire chapter 4
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Great story but would read better if there were quotation marks (") denoting the conversations. |
| 2018-08-15 05:39:57 |
Step Daughters' Desire chapter 5
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Great story but would read better if there were quotation marks (") denoting the conversations. |
| 2018-08-15 05:40:02 |
Step Daughters' Desire chapter 6_(1)
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Great story but would read better if there were quotation marks (") denoting the conversations. |
| 2018-09-15 11:46:24 |
Daughter's Cure for A Hangover
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You need to proof read your story. How did they all get dressed when they were naked when they woke up? |
| 2018-10-04 11:37:36 |
best friends share part 1
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If you are going to rip off Rod O'Steele at least post the complete story not just half. |