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Comments from GingerCat
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2011-07-15 03:45:15 | This is a good story that is well thought out and most of all has likable and believable characters (something you don't often find on this site). My only slight criticism is that i think they went from being brother and sister to being lovers a bit to quickly. I would have preferred a slower build up rather than a quick one. However other than that this is certainly one of my favourite stories on this site and i hope you know that you are certainly one of the best writers on this site as your stories are about characters as well as sex (whereas a lot of other stories are all sex and no characters). |
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2011-07-15 19:58:49 | Big Brothers are the best: Part I | Its a little bit quick as Jack seemed to go from just being a brother to wanting to have sex with his little sister in only a matter of seconds. |
2011-07-18 05:33:58 | Hermione and Ron finally together | I love this story. There is so many really bad Harry Potter fan fiction stories on this site where characterisation just goes right out the window. This story proves that a story can be extremely erotic and hot while remaining true to the characters. Please please please keep writing more Ron/Hermione fan fiction. |
2011-07-28 19:39:04 | The Potter Wives | If you can't keep the characters in character why bother writing Harry Potter fan fiction? |
2011-08-12 20:21:06 | Mother With The Hots_(1) | This is certainly a well written and hot story though i think i would have preferred it if the son wasn't initally interested in the mother and there was a long build up of the mother finding ways to first get her son interested in her and then her seducing him. |