| 2018-10-28 23:29:16 |
My Name Is Colton
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Until she gets some self esteem and calls the cops. She's not a dog, you know. |
| 2018-11-05 03:40:25 |
Revenge of a D&D Nerd
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That was pretty good, formatted right for easy reading and well written; the tale moved along nicely with an obvious beginning, middle, and end. Thumbs up! |
| 2018-11-05 23:13:23 |
The making of a slut Chapt 1_(0)
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Daughter needs to see the tape of her mother and be offered the chance to "save" her. |
| 2018-11-20 21:36:00 |
Movie Night_(8)
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Too short, and no paragraph breaks. Her POV would be okay for a break from the narrative, and some dialog, too. Downvoted, sorry |
| 2018-12-02 17:06:48 |
Wrestling with my Sister Part 1
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Are you ever going to finish this? I'm not really one to talk about finishing anything, but this was started well, and she needs to explore the little slut inside her. |