| 2018-05-13 17:56:35 |
Slave Game
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I just watched an interview with John Michael Godier, and he gave aspiring writers some free advice. He said, "If you don't have an ending, don't even start." That's good advice, and I apologize for my previous work. I've started some shit with no endings, oops. |
| 2018-05-14 23:16:23 |
Egg Ch. 1
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interesting. Grammar and spelling problems are the least of my problems with reading amateur authors; I'm interested to see where this goes. You've created quite an interesting universe here. |
| 2018-06-01 03:18:57 |
I didn't know...
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This was pretty good. I like your style, ad the POV of the little girl is perfect. Write some more of this? |
| 2018-06-13 04:45:27 |
Turning My Brother Into a Geek!!!
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Excellent tale of debauchery and incest. Keep it up |
| 2018-07-09 19:49:34 |
The Daughter
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That was pretty good, and well told. That little girl ain't so innocent, is she? Dad can learn some things from her. I bet Mom will like tying them out, too |