| 2011-04-17 00:19:42 |
My Sister Suzie Q
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Completely unreadable. |
| 2011-04-18 00:27:36 |
Birthday sex - re written due to poor spelling
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The spelling is still very poor. The sentence construction is poor and use of paragraphs non-existent. Unless English is not your primary language, this is total drivel. |
| 2012-05-04 17:52:53 |
Cousin Amanda First Time incest.
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The sentence structure is horrible. The capitalization, punctuation and spelling is even worse. If English is not your first language, then I recommend that you write the story in your native tongue and then have it translated by someone who is fluent in English. |
| 2013-03-02 21:45:55 |
The Rapper and the Sportscaster - Down in The Dumps
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Totally unreadable garbage. |
| 2013-03-12 22:05:04 |
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A very well done chain of stories. I am eagerly awaiting part V. |