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Comments from Archaic
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-08-25 21:51:00 | You've completely lost any narrative thread you had from the earlier stories. Quit taking stupid dares and get back to trying to create a story. | |
| 2013-12-03 23:27:59 | Win a Date with Quinn_(1) | Ah yes Quinn, one of my all time favorites. You should do a sequel with Whitney. One thing, perhaps breaking up the paragraphs at the start would help a bit. Keep writing! |
| 2013-12-10 22:43:28 | Bathtime with Daddy~ (Part 1)_(2) | "Fiction , Blowjob, Cum Swallowing, Domination/submission, First Time, Incest, Male Domination, Older Male / Female, Oral Sex, Rape, Reluctance, Romance, Virginity, Young, Written by women, Fan fiction" Liar |
| 2013-12-10 23:32:20 | My Step Daughter_(1) | Holy paragraph abuse batman! |