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Comments from NGSalem
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-09-14 20:48:52 | Hell Hath No Fury...Ch2 | Nooooo the end of this chapter already? Anxiously awaiting the next chapter, I can't wait to see what becomes of the cheating scum! Salem |
| 2011-10-05 23:58:45 | Daddy luvin | Well I'm not sure about the rest of yall, but I quite enjoyed this story. Very well written and I couldn't find a grammar mistake, which I was quite pleased with :) Good job as your first story, and I do hope you continue with this more, nothing like love and tenderness at a young age... NGSalem |
| 2011-10-06 19:35:58 | Strawberry (Chap 5)_(0) | Hmmm overall, really good. Not sure how I feel about the introduction of Dori into this. I do hope this wasn't a foreshadow of things to come involving Dori's secretive business practice and the girls. Having the girls become prostitutes would wreck the series for me. It may be a bit silly to say "Maintain the innocence", considering what has already occurred, but I think it's fitting. It's one thing to have an 18 year old woman do it, it's an entirely different matter to have "innocent" pre-teens involved in it. So please, don't do it, I'm entirely content reading about the innocent escapades of Tom, Strawberry, and co. Looking forward to more. NGSalem NGSalem |
| 2011-10-25 20:57:45 | I Lust My Sister Meridian | To the dumbass below, this was on nivek 88's favorites list, not stories posted by him. Research before making stupid claims, makes you seem like less of an idiot. Although at this point, attempting to mask your stupidity would be like putting on a rain coat when you're already wet. *sigh* NGSalem |
| 2011-10-30 23:25:26 | MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 10 CONSPIRATORS | So glad to see the next chapter, wanted to give my thanks before I even got to the story. Even logged in this time instead of just signing my name at the end like usual (Like it matters). I'm sure there was a good explanation you left us hanging, real world dominates over this any day, but it still was quite the suspense. Anxiously await the next part, hopefully one that takes less than two and a half months to make! NGSalem |