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Comments from Magichands
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-31 15:20:57 | Fantasy, Fulfilled | Well this seemed interesting at first, I can deal with a few typo's and so on. However the frequent mistakes became very annoying... and then the guy says, "go and sit on the best". Yeah, I believe I understand, you're writing 'in the flow' and it is understandable. But to me, and to other pedants, all those obvious mistakes are absolutely jarring. They destroy the flow of reading a story. After "sit on the best", I could not read any more. The story idea is probably good, but the writing is terrible. Please spell-ckeck, read the story again, make some corrections, and repost. |
| 2019-04-08 07:05:34 | Aria's New Life Pt3 | Fantastic story. A really out there idea, and well written. |
| 2019-04-21 14:49:56 | Alexis' slumber party | Very good first offering, a few typos such as " I just shook his head and went back to work. " at the end of the 6th paragraph. But not many and they don't disturb the story flow. So well done. |
| 2019-04-23 13:46:30 | My Fluffy Sister | I've read this several times, one of the best on this site. |
| 2019-05-13 16:28:08 | Canadian Vacation_(0) | I agree with Doc, one hell of a read. One of the very best on this site. Well paced enough detail and great descriptions. Excellent job! |