| 2011-09-05 08:07:51 |
I found my sister stripping.
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this was awesome! great writing and intruging story line. |
| 2011-09-08 05:38:20 |
Family Orgy_(0)
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great GREAT story man! except for the gay parts which was kinda disgusting (and the pissing too) but thats just my quiet opinion and you can do watever u lilke. it was pretty decent writing and good buildup. yes it was hard to keep up with names but u just have put up with that as its part of the story. now, after saying all these things, i just remembered that you said that you didnt write this story. ifeel real dumb but you could just send this to the guy who wrote it. anyway, fucking awesome story. |
| 2011-09-08 09:30:04 |
The Best Prom Ever
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i strongly agree. this story was very very well written and had a lot of good description and an excellent buildup. please do make a sequal. this is one hell of a fucking good job. |
| 2011-09-10 20:35:59 |
Love and Lust on the Alcan Highway - Chapter 1
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excellent excellent! the writing was superb and almost perfect and the storyline was well thought too. please do make a sequal. |
| 2011-09-13 06:23:30 |
Flip The Switch
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hmmm ... ive always wanted t see what it was like being girl. good story good writing bro. |