| 2011-09-15 11:14:57 |
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Guys, Part 2 is already up with part 3.. This is just a edited upload of the first part to check if I got the grammar bugs out. If you want the other parts just click my name.
@Anonymous reader
2011-09-15 01:15:57
Are you that much of a douchebag yourself? Oh wow... A spelling mistake in a word that isn't even part of the story. Do you get off to yourself been so pedantic or somthing because frankly your comment is ill constructed and just a waste AND insult to the english language even more so than the actual spelling mistake.
Next time take note from
Anonymous reader
2011-09-14 23:18:03
and don't be a dick about it please. |
| 2011-09-23 19:52:19 |
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@Kenny
Thanks for the comments, I always read the comments on my stories and take into consideration what people say. As for the views of a fifteen year old, The reason why that is fairly accurate is because I am only 22, so I still have a fair ammount of memory of what it was like been a young teenager. Also thanks for been supportive with the grammer and spelling issues, I've found the american and english dictionary to be a pain at times also.
I've read a few of your stories and found the writing to be great but I personally am not really a fan of gay sex so it didn't appeal to me much but the quality of the writing was great.
Thanks for comment. |
| 2011-10-29 02:27:52 |
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Bondage and torture aint usually my thing, I prefer the first part more as it was more relaxed and fun for everyone, But still great story which I did enjoy. So Positive rating from me :) Keep them coming.
Cuddlesthabear. |
| 2012-02-17 14:17:12 |
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Not usually my type of theme but I decided to give this story a chance and boy am I glad I did. I loved it, It's clear you spent alot of time working on this story and putting in details that made this story stand out amongst the common generic sex stories that are spammed on this site.
Really glad to see another author who hasn't fallen into trap of writing generic stories that all look similiar so thank-you for the thrilling adventure story you have written here :) Look forward to reading more in the future.
Yours.
Cuddlesthabear. |