| 2012-08-26 17:29:05 |
SEX FORMULA 69
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It was nice to see you put your personal stamp on this story. Great job! |
| 2012-08-26 17:36:35 |
I AM NUMBER 69 (CAW 12 Entry)
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I think you captured the fantasy of so many women. Good job. |
| 2012-10-22 21:14:46 |
Sister Catherine's Nighmare – CAW 13
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Wonderfully written even if it was very violent. I really enjoyed your character. |
| 2012-10-22 21:24:48 |
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I've never played D&D, but your story made it fairly easy to understand. Your descriptions helped me to visualize every scene. Great story. |
| 2012-10-22 21:29:59 |
Chili, Booze, Nightmares, and the Girl Next Door
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Very creepy and a great Halloween story. If I had one criticism, it's that it read like you were writing for the male audience. There's nothing wrong with that - after all, you appear to be male. |