| 2012-10-22 21:32:19 |
Angela_(0)
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Loved your characters and the way you lead us to believe one thing throughout the story. Then ending gave me chills. Nice pace and really well written. |
| 2012-10-22 21:49:13 |
CAW13 - Pimp's Revenge
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Extreme. That's the word I think of when I read this. Extreme. Good luck with the CAW. |
| 2012-10-22 21:51:39 |
Unknown Presence - The Vessel
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Very very creepy. I sometimes knew what would happen, and then you turned it around and surprised me. Good job. |
| 2013-01-02 20:40:51 |
Marie's Christmas
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This was a true compliment to the original story. Well-written, good formatting, nice flow and filled with holiday magic. |
| 2016-08-28 11:53:26 |
Remember That Night
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Brilliantly written conveying emotion so often not found on this site. |