| 2012-09-28 08:18:12 |
A Game of Inches - Part Fifteen
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Thanks to everyone for the kind words. After hours of thought, I think I may have worked out a conclusion in my head. I started writing it last night. I hope to post the last chapter and conclusion sometime next week. Thanks for your patience as always. I have learned many valuable lessons writing this story which I hope will make me a better writer in the future. Once again, I cannot tell all of you how appreciate I am of your support. Take care and be safe. |
| 2012-10-10 17:24:39 |
A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue
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I want to personally thank everyone for the amazing feedback I received for the Conclusion of "A Game of Inches", it was simply incredible. I also want to thank everyone who gave me negative feedback when you felt I deviated from my story. At first, i was tempted to abandon it, but then I realized that had I not tried to please everyone, it would not have happened. Now I will outline a story prior to writing, I will stay true to my plot, even though the readers opinions will still be considered. Some of the comments posted for the Conclusion, expressed concern that I should have expanded my conclusion to include what happened to Ashley, Mr. & Mrs. Timmons, their daughter Gia, Coach Mike, and well as several other characters. I could have probably did that, but it would have taken many more chapters to conclude and I felt , along with support from many of the veteran writers on the site, it was time to end it. So I kept it simple, to the point, and what I wanted. I feel good about the e |
| 2012-10-10 17:26:28 |
A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue
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I feel good about the ending, as I think many of you do as well. Once again, my sincere gratitude for the support you have given me, it has been very overwhelming and humbling to say the least. Writing is new to me, so for all of you to be so supportive means so very much. Take care and be safe. |
| 2012-10-15 17:09:50 |
A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue
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I thank everyone for the countless emails that you have sent. Alot of people have asked me to rewrite the conclusion and epilogue, dozens have asked that I start writing another series detailing Brian and Alexis in their later lives. At this time, I have no plans to do either. I'm comfortable with the story as it is, I feel I have gone as far as I can with it. Perhaps in the future I might consider A Game Of Inches, The Later Years, but for now, I am working on a new story. Thanks for all of the emails and support, I appreciate it. |
| 2012-10-18 13:25:30 |
Mom's my girlfriend
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I'm not much for the typical incest story, but I think you did a really good job on this one, especially in detailing the characters feelings for each other. I think you could perhaps go several more chapters with this one. Good luck. |