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Comments from AngelEyes15
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-11-11 03:42:35 | The Egocentric King - Part one | is this spam? not very sexy anyway sorry, and language is a bit weird |
| 2011-11-12 05:23:48 | {cove} - 1 | Great start, love the atmosphere |
| 2011-11-13 16:48:51 | I am the Puppet MAter Chapter One: Coin Operated Girl | Why? You anwered your own question. I don't think its art sorry |
| 2011-11-21 06:47:05 | Bait and Switch Ch. 02 | it's not a bad story just a bit fake with the switches i think, n the sex not ALL that sexy is it, time to take it off 100% anyway as you have others :) |
| 2011-11-22 04:36:30 | Violated | It was nearly great but you needed to explain Wade's change and the gunk thing. It's like the @@@ is where you shoved 2 different stories together. Hope you write more but get organised first :) |